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Elaine's avatar

perfectly timed; you really are so talented at naming the new substances we find ourselves swimming in. to this i say, exploit my agency. the only control i believe i have is how freely i let my agency be used by others, and that does mean something to me :)

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When I saw the title of this article in my notifications I immediately jumped to read it, as it’s almost word for word something I’d say is central to my own way of thinking. However, after having read it, I felt it didn’t get to the core of the title and left wanting more to resonate with.

This article seems to highlight one specific aspect of the broader topic of “agency x orientation” which is specifically the idea of internally selected orientation vs externally imposed or osmotically received orientation.

I think it’s fully worthwhile to discuss that aspect, and I appreciate that it was, but I’d have loved to see more said about specifically the relationship between agency, orientation, and outcomes, rather than a primary focus on the warning against unconsciously received orientation.

The last two paragraphs felt like getting to the start of the meat but it was the end. Maybe the shape of the essay feels inverted to me, but that might be personal temperament/appetite for analytical explication as opposed to more of a short-form journey. I do think once it got to the explicit thesis at the end, I’d have liked to see more development of implications and application of the thesis.

I don’t say this hoping it comes off as critical so much as I think you have more to say! I’d love to hear you expound on this topic in the future. Thanks sherry :)

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